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Saturday, April 25, 2015

Wimpy Teacher, Hot Wife (Picture Version)



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  1. I like this story, but i think it's too brief.

    The early build up is great, I really like a lot of set up to a story, and the husbands side is really fleshed out which is why i like it. But i think a few more lines from the wifes side to flesh her out would be better. And a bit more details about the lead up to the actual sexual encounter would work too.

    Love your site and what you do either way. Keep it up!

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